Saturday 15 January 2011

feedback from opening draft

to improve on:

make the manes of the actors more visible to see
all ways keep characters in the shot when changing scene
improve concatenation at gun shoot-out
break up some of the longer shots


positive feedback:

characters clothing is good
good story plot (stuck to the storyboard)
good choice of music
most of concatenation is good

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