final version of Geisel film opening

feedback from opening draft

to improve on:

make the manes of the actors more visible to see

all ways keep characters in the shot when changing scene

improve concatenation at gun shoot-out

break up some of the longer shots

positive feedback:

characters clothing is good

good story plot (stuck to the storyboard)

good choice of music

most of concatenation is good

Giesel draft opening

ident idea1

this ident has a simple design to it but it looks god and professional, i may use this design in my film opening.

possible props that i will use in my film

this might be used by the robber who is being chased by the undercover police officer

this might be used by the criminal kidnapper

this might be worn by the criminal kidnapper to hide their identity

this might be used by the undercover police officer

names for the characters in the film

Rhys = John Castelbury

Damon = Danny Hudson

Joe = Jason Fleymin

decision on film title

i have decided to go with Geisel, this is because the meaning of it fits in with what the storyline is all about in the film and it sounds catchy. because of these reasons i have decided to us Geisel as my film title.